Quest of worlds
© by me
CHAPTER 1 Fall Of Renaise
It was a time of war Grado were rivals with every other faction. But no more then Renaise, Renaise were the empire of the world and were remarkbly kind hearted people. As Seth leaned againts the marble wall he could here a THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!. He ran as fast as possible down the castle halls towards the gate when he got there he got a nasty suprise. Grados men had captured the gates. The guards which were posted there were all piled up on the cold hard stone floor. Then the red headed male with dragon scale armour seth charged down towards the men who had killed the guards. He swung his blade not one not twice but three times he had got them all in one hit. Then it hit him “The King” Shouted seth on the way he had ran into erika the blue haired woman with nice charm was also the kings daughter. “Hes dead” She cried “Who’s dead” seth asked “The king” Renaise had fallen to grado.
CHAPTER 2 ESCAPE
Seth grabbed Erika by the arm and headed towards the window. He thrue his fist at the glass it smashed into a thousand pieces. He jumped bringing Erika with him he had fallen into the forest of Renaise soon to be the forest of Grado. As they stood Erika pointed to the far south three Bandits were coming there way. Erika charged wielding her rapier which is a kind of sword. Seth cried “Erika wait” She had ignored him and charged anyway. As she neared 1 bandit she saw seth charging on his horse toward the other bandit. Erika slashed and had took out the bandit she was hit to a cut injury in the arm was left. Seth slashed the bandit dodged and slashed with the axe. Seth’s horse kicked the bandit the bandit was also dead. The leader turned and laughed at Erika He mumbled “Grado will reward me handsomly with the defeat of the princes”. But not noticing that seth had snuck up on him it was to late the bandit was defeated. Erika knew that there were more tough times ahead. “Wait” cried a voice from afar it was Vanessa She was a pegusas knight with blue eyes and green hair. She asked if she could join Seth replyed with yes. Now it was the three of them.
CHAPTER 3 EMPHRAIM PRINCE EMPHRAIM
The stragglers headed toward the city of Hobitouse which was a place of rebles bandits crooks and buzzukars in other worlds the capital of crooks. There they heard a comotion coming from the east gate as they headed there Vannasa made a smart remark ” If theres a problem shouldnt we be running away?” No one answerd. As they neared where the comotion was coming from they heard someone say “the prince is here” Erika gave a weak smile could it be? She ran ahead of the two and saw what she wanted.
CHAPTER 4 A SHORT CHAPTER
Her brother prince emphraim he survived grado so had his 3 companions Kyle, Maximus and Doslo they stood ahead Seth asked would they join?
CHAPTER 5 YES OR NO
nadine has said yes
chapter 6 not really biological
erika was fighting with her brother or something like that. They soon discover that they both aren’t really related and were adopted. So they are pretty shocked and upset and as soon as they are hit with this news, they are too busy crying and thinking that someone sneaks behind them and…
THEY CAPTURE ERIKA! Her brother runs after her, but is too late as they drive off. He couldn’t tell who took her, but he got on his horse and rode off to follow. It takes him 2 days to find her, searching everywhere, When he does, he finds her dead, with blood coming out of her mouth, all over the floor in front of his house! He takes her in and cries. His tears are special and turn out to revive her so she lives….
by nadine @ nadinel.learnerblogs.org





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January 5th, 2009 at 10:20 pm
Hi Pina
I LOVE IT! It is really good. But the only thing you should edit is to add more detail to what I wrote and you’ll have it perfectly!
Thanks for choosing my story! It means alot. And I’m loving this Quest Of worlds which is fantastic and interesting.
Remember, just put more detail a bit and you can add a few extra things in like how he feels, what happens every minute!
HAPPY NEW YEAR!
Hugs, Nadine